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2012高考材料作文指导训练及范文
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从前有位农场主巡视谷仓时,不慎将一只名表遗失,因遍寻不获,便决定悬赏寻表,要农场上的小孩帮忙寻找,谁能找到手表,赏金500美元。众小孩在重赏之下,无不卖力搜寻,奈何谷仓内到处都是成堆的谷粒和稻草,大家忙到太阳下山仍一无所获,结果一个个都放弃了。只有一个小孩,为了那笔巨额赏金,仍不死心地继续寻找。当天色渐黑,众人离去,谷仓静下来之后,他突然听到一个奇怪的声音。那声音“滴答、滴答”不停地响着,小孩立刻停下所有的动作,谷仓内更安静了,滴答声也响得更为清晰。小孩循着声音,终于在偌大漆黑的谷仓中找到了那只名贵手表。
静是大自然的赏赐,静是一种奇妙的心态,静是一种和谐温馨的社会风情画?? 请以“静的魅力”为题,自定立意,自选文体,写一篇不少于800字的作文。
[写作提示] 结合命题材料,尤其是材料第2段充满智慧的点评,认真审读文题“静的魅力”,可以体悟到,文题的中心语是“魅力”,关键的修饰语是“静”,此篇作文要以“静”为思维基点,以“静的魅力”即“静”所带给人们的美的享受和净化心灵、提升心灵为主旨下笔行文。
静的魅力
刘菲菲
静水流深,不显不露。静,以外观默默无闻的姿态隐藏着内在的力量、深刻的思想。一个“静”字,竟是如此深邃,如此富有禅意,富有魅力。
身静,方可心无旁骛;专心思索,方能得大智慧。佛家禅宗似乎是最早领悟到这一要诀的。禅宗的必修课,也是入门功夫——坐禅,就要修行者身静入定,诵经冥想。双目一闭,便将滚滚红尘、污垢尘埃尽闭于心门之外;身静入定,便不为外物所役而细品沉思。 自印度莲花大师始,不少僧人在喜马拉雅山挖洞面壁而居,饥餐荨麻,渴饮雪水,形容枯槁而终于“静”思得佛门真谛,成为一代高僧。面壁,或思过,或悟道,成功的前提就是身静。身如静水,不显不露,方能让思想纵横千里。
心静,方可遗世独立,羽化登仙。单纯的身静,心中依然万念错杂,自然不可得道。身静的同时,更要心静。不去想那人间的纷杂,只将一片冰心浸入雪水,感受静的冰凉怡人,放松精神。而到了更高层的境界,即便身不能打坐入定,心依旧可如止水。于是,你不必奇怪陶渊明“结庐在人境,而无车马喧”的感受,只因为他“心远地自偏”;你不必奇怪苏东坡被贬黄州,仍能于赤壁之下高歌放舟,只因为他从不变的静中,悟出了“物与我皆无尽也”的大境界,于是便可“浩浩乎如冯虚御风,而不知其所止;飘飘乎如遗世独立,羽化而登仙”。 智者在静中修身悟道,在静中羽化登仙,在静中凝聚起了千年的智慧和深不可测的力量。但他们还是保留着那份静,或许是习惯已成为自然。直到有一天他们打破了沉默,你才惊讶他们的智慧与博大,于是才有那“不飞则已,一飞冲天;不鸣则已,一鸣惊人”的感慨。《天龙八部》中第一高手,竟是少林一个默默无闻的扫地僧;助魏公子窃符救赵的侯生原本也只是大梁夷门的一个守门人;智慧象征的诸葛亮,出茅庐之前也只是躬耕于南阳的农夫??他们往日的静正反衬出有朝一日力量爆发的可怕,就如同火山的静,那不是单纯的沉默,而是为了蓄积之后的爆发!
于是不难理解嵇康在面对前呼后拥,大讲排场来拜见他的钟会时,仍旧不理不睬,只在熊熊的炉火和铿锵的锤声中默默忙碌的举动。圣贤的静,岂容俗世的嘈杂来打破?智者乐水,
仁者乐山,千年前的智者从深邃的静水中悟出了禅意。这禅意并非不可言传,只是现在,还有多少人能够静下心来去感悟呢?这也许是现代文明的悲哀。
[名师点评] 本文作者审题准确,文章的观点比较深刻,特别是结尾的一段文字,把古圣先贤静的心态与现代世俗之人浮躁庸俗的心态加以对比,巧妙发问,引人思考,使文章主旨得以深化和升华。
二、阅读下面的文字,根据要求作文
“山重水复疑无路,柳暗花明又一村”,宋代诗人陆游这两句诗,描述了山水萦绕的迷路感觉与移步换形又见新景象的喜悦之情,表现了人生或社会变化发展的规律性,富于哲理。
对此,你有类似的生活体验吗?你有新的感受吗?请写一篇不少于800字的文章。 要求选择一个角度构思作文,自定立意,自选文体,自拟标题;不要脱离材料的内容及含意的范围作文,不要套作,不得抄袭。
[写作提示] 仔细审读材料,认真揣摩其内涵,可以知道“山重水复”比喻逆境和磨难,“柳暗花明”比喻光明的前景。因而,本作文试题的最佳命意为:逆境往往蕴涵着无限的希望,无论道路多么艰难,只要坚定信念,勇于开拓进取,人生就能“绝处逢生”,迎来光明、成功和辉煌。
“柳暗花明”的召唤
张 瑜
乌云遮不住太阳的光辉,荆棘挡不住勇敢者的脚步。
—题记
“山重水复疑无路,柳暗花明又一村”,这是宋代大诗人陆游的诗句。吟诵着这富有哲理的诗句,你的心头会荡起清爽的夏风,将丝丝阴云一一驱散,即使遭遇逆境、磨难,也将永远坚强而乐观。
“山重水复疑无路”,山水回环,脚步回环。人生在世,大凡谁都会遭逢逆境,但山重水复的迷失,动摇不了开拓者坚定的信念。我们相信,“移步换形”之后,一定会有“柳暗花明”的美丽景观。
“山重水复”是上帝赐给人类的考验,而“柳暗花明”则是上帝赋予人类睿智豁达的人生召唤。
人在旅途,“柳暗花明”的召唤,会给人以心灵的慰藉和温馨。罗映珍,一个普通警察的妻子,当得知她的丈夫与歹徒搏斗负重伤而住进医院时,当医生告诉她,她的丈夫将不可能从昏迷中醒来而成为植物人时,她简直到了“山重水复疑无路”的人生绝境了。然而,罗映珍的精神支柱并没有垮掉,她的耳畔响起了“柳暗花明”的人生召唤,她以爱心、忍耐和温柔,呵护体贴丈夫,终于使丈夫奇迹般地醒来。这是大爱真情的奇迹,更是“柳暗花明”人生召唤的奇迹。
“柳暗花明”的召唤会给人以顽强的意志和力量。回首2008年,当地动山摇之时,当房倒屋塌之际,失去了家园和亲人的四川人民在流血、在哭泣,但四川人民并没有悲观丧气,没有慨叹“天将亡我也”,“柳暗花明”的哲理召唤,使他们在全国人民的关怀和支持下,奋力拼搏,抗震救灾。于是,四川人民的脸上又写满了阳光,四川大地又写满了世人瞩目的“万象更新”。
“柳暗花明”的召唤会带给人们成材成功的累累硕果。史铁生——当代杰出的文学家,曾遭遇双腿残疾的人生厄运,但母亲的安慰,地坛的启示,“柳暗花明”的哲理召唤,终于使他走出“山重水复”的迷惘,开拓出一片新天地;贝多芬——天才的音乐家,曾双耳失聪,但“柳暗花明”的召唤,吹干了他眼角的泪痕,吹醒了他奋斗勃发的信念,使贝多芬的人生
之树结出了《命运交响曲》的音乐硕果,而光耀千秋。
“山重水复”,是上帝赐给你的金色考验;“柳暗花明”,则是上帝睿智的人生召唤。 “山重水复疑无路,柳暗花明又一村”,让我们静静地聆听,默默地铭记,这是最宝贵的人生召唤!
[名师点评] 本文作者审题准确,立意恰当,主旨观点鲜明而深刻。尤其是文中“‘山重水复’,是上帝赐给你的金色考验;‘柳暗花明’,则是上帝睿智的人生召唤”这段话观点新颖别致,文采浓郁,真可谓点睛之笔。
三、阅读下面的文字,根据要求作文
大自然是一部博大精深的教科书,她可以启发人们去思索生活,去寻求生命的意义。高山教人以刚强,溪流教人以欢快;菊花教人以高洁,绿茵教人以质朴;大海教人以胸怀豁达,森林教人以庄重沉静。如此等等,不一而足。
请你结合自己的思想经历,以“大自然的启迪”为话题,写一篇文章;立意自定,文体自选,题目自拟,不少于800字。
[写作提示] 这是一道颇具特色的话题作文试题。考生写作此文要注意以下两个方面:第一,根据作文材料的行文特色,特别是写作要求,要写好这篇作文,最好选用托物言志的散文体裁;第二,认真审读作文材料,仔细揣摩写作要求,从作文审题方面,切实把握好“从大自然中得到的人生启迪”的话题导向,并以此作为立意的基点。
沙洲的芦苇
叶晓菲
我爱芦苇,我爱沙洲之上初春的芦苇——苇芽尖尖,光泽莹莹,贮满了生命的淡泊和淳朴。春日伊始,乍暖还寒时候,沙洲的芦苇已悄悄地伸展开它的根须,汲取着泥土中些许的营养,生机萌动,破冰拔节,茁壮生长。虽然它清醒地知道,这里没有温室,没有肥料,没有农人勤恳的呵护,没有梨园歌手柔情万种的歌咏和赞叹,但它们只要有湛湛的蓝天,朵朵的白云,便觉知足,便觉愉悦而惬意。有了这些,它们就可以在第一缕阳光溜进眼眸的时候,开始平凡而诗意的生活,演绎朴素而淡泊的生命乐章。
我爱芦苇,我爱沙洲之上秋日的芦苇——“蒹葭苍苍,白露为霜”,披霜的芦苇最可诠释不屈的坚韧和刚强。秋风瑟瑟,百花凋零,而芦花却开得圣洁而潇洒;严霜袭来,百草枯萎,而沙洲的芦苇却仍然凛然挺立,不屈不挠。君可知,在历史的时空中,沙洲的芦苇曾被三国争雄的烽火烧得满目疮痍,但是“野火烧不尽,春风吹又生”,来年“红杏枝头春意闹”的时候,沙洲的芦苇又是葱葱绿绿,风采无限;君可知,在汗青的记忆里,“风萧萧兮易水寒,壮士一去兮不复还”,荆轲为燕国铲除暴秦踏上了千古不归路,而沙洲上的芦苇则伴着萧瑟秋风,伴着高渐离的击筑声,沙沙作响,为荆轲壮行;君可知,在抗战的史册中,日寇的铁蹄曾肆意地践踏北国白洋淀沙洲的芦苇,然而一片芦苇倒下了,千千万万丛芦苇顽强地聚在一起,霹雳一闪,无边的火海把日寇的残暴和淫威烧成了灰烬。
我爱芦苇,我爱春夏之际沙洲上的芦苇——苇叶飘举,苇秆婷婷。此时此刻,沙洲的芦苇最能给人“和睦和谐,与人为善”的微妙启迪。你看,河流涨了,湖泊满了,一片片沙洲次第隐没,芦苇便怡然自得地融进河湖港汊的大家庭。红鱼在芦苇中穿梭,青蛙在芦苇的脚跟鸣唱,调皮的蜻蜓一只只、一群群在苇叶之间、芦花之上盘旋嬉戏,而芦苇则像极了敦厚的兄长,它不恼不怒,一株株、一丛丛,你挨着我,我挨着你,为大家庭搭建起凉棚,任风雨敲击摧残亦无怨无悔。
举目芸芸众生,放眼山山水水,我要说,我爱芦苇,我爱在水一方的沙洲的芦苇。 这一片芦苇,青翠欲滴,郁郁葱葱,深深地扎根于沙洲之上,年年岁岁,岁岁年年,摇
曳着尘世的沧桑,滴溅着生命的启迪,教我心境淡泊,教我朴质刚强,教我与人为善,教我每天笑迎那一轮温馨的朝阳??
我爱在水一方的沙洲的芦苇!
[名师点评] 本文作者审题准确,描写极富文采,字里行间激情洋溢。作者借沙洲芦苇,体悟出“淡泊淳朴”“坚韧刚强”“和谐处世”的人生哲理,层次清晰,逻辑严密。“红鱼在芦苇中穿梭,青蛙在芦苇的脚跟鸣唱,调皮的蜻蜓一只只、一群群在苇叶之间、芦花之上盘旋嬉戏,而芦苇则像极了敦厚的兄长,它不恼不怒,一株株、一丛丛,你挨着我,我挨着你,为大家庭搭建起凉棚,任风雨敲击摧残亦无怨无悔”这段行文,颇有诗情画意,艺术而形象地体现了主旨情感,令人频频击节称叹。
友谊是人类关系的一种。这是人类的本能,当陷入困境,我们需要朋友向我们提供帮助,支持和鼓励。成功实现时,我们也需要朋友分享我们的快乐。下面给大家分享一些高考英语作文题友谊,希望对大家有帮助。
高考英语作文题友谊1In our daily life, if we get on harmoniously with our friends, we’ll feelmore joyous.But we’ll feel lonely without friends.When our friends feel upsetor get ill, we shouldn’t ignore them or look down upon them.On the contrary, weought to calm them down, show our love and concern to them and try our best tohelp them overcome the hardships.Sometimes we may have some misunderstandingsor disagreements with our friends, thus we had better have a discussion withthem and try to accept their good ideas instead of quarreling with them.As longas we can follow these good suggestions, we’ll find it easy to make morefriends.
高考英语作文题友谊2People often say that friends are priceless.So it is certain thatfriendship is very important.The following are the examples of myself toexplain this opinion.
Friends share happiness, which makes us delightful.For example, one of mybest classmates, Cloud, when she told me she got a good mark and was in the topten.Before I replied she said again, \"Because you are my best friend, I want toshare the good news with you at the first time\".Hearing that, I knew she washappier after she told me.At that time we were two happy birds flying in thesky.In a word, friends play with me in my spare time that let me feel needed.They always keep company with me when I am depressed.But they don’t do whateverI want.Sometimes they are against with me while they think I am wrong.I stillremember once I quarreled with my math teacher.At last, it was my friends mademe realize my fault, and then solved the entire problem smoothly.
In my opinion, friends are one of the most important people in our life.Wecan’t live without friends.It is valuable for everyone.
高考英语作文题友谊3Friendship is a kind of human relations.It is a human instinct to makefriends.When in trouble, we need friends to offer us help, support andencouragement.With success achieved, we also need friends to share our joys.Friendship is also one of the greatest pleasures that we can enjoy.It impliesloyalty, cordiality, sympathy, affection,and readiness to help.No man can makethe most of his life without carefully and conscientiously striving to win theright kind of friends as he goes along.
Knowing how valuable friendship is, we should be very careful in makingfriends.Real friends are those who have good character, superior ability andkindness of heart.Real friends can share all our sorrows and double all ourjoys.While making friends, we should take care to select those who have suchfine qualities.Then we should treat our friends with courtesy, be careful notto interfere unreasonably with them,and not to ridicule their proceedings.Weshould forgive their failures and do our best to help them.In short, when wehave established friendship, we ought to cherish and treasure it by means ofwords and deeds.Only thus, can we develop real friendship and keep the sacredlamp of friendship burning all our life.
高考英语作文题友谊4I have a very good friend, and her name is Li Hong.She is a very niceperson that she always helps me to solve many problems.So I like to share mysecret with her and she promises me to never tell others.The friendship makesme stronger.When I feel sad, I can talk to Li Hong.I wish I can do somethingfor her.
高考英语作文题友谊5Friendship is essential for the existence of society.People live incommunities and work in co-operation so that they could protect themselves fromnature.The successful accomplishment of any task calls for support from manypeople.It’s the friends who are willing to help us.Friendship is a guaranteeof harmonious efforts.
In the widest sense, all people are friends.People live in a commonsociety, co-operating and helping each other directly or indirectly all thetime.From this respective, anyone could be a friend of others to a certaindegree.And it’s this kind of friendship that makes society harmonious thoughcompetition is universal.
A friend in need is a friend indeed.Unfortunately, people are so complexin the modern society due to various reasons.Sometimes, we don’t really knowwho are our real friends.Adversity is the touchstone of friendship.That is tosay, in hard times, it is easy for us to test whether the friendship is ture ornot.No matter what happens, a true friend will never leave you alone and willalways be with you.
高考英语作文写作技巧
高考英语作文写作技巧
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高考英语高分策略
? 第一部分: 词!
? 第二部分: 句!
? 第三部分: 衔接!
? 第四部分: 套用!
NO.1书面词
? 希望:Hope→expectation ? 合作:cooperation
? 机会:chance→opportunity ? 汽车:car??→vehicle
? 组织:organization ? 总是:always???→all the time ? 尽力:devote …to / make every effort to do / do one’s utmost(最最) to do
? 参观:visit / show sb. around(有人带领)/ catch a sight of
秘诀1:在作文中,尽量使用名词或以名词为核心的短语
NO.2 特色词
? 认为:think、insist、emphasize、persist(in)doing sth.
? I hold the opinion that….
? 喜欢:be fond of、be keen on、be interested in
? Be fascinated with
? 人:people??→individual
? 如果: if、on condition that、provided that、
? assuming that
? 我爱你:ILOVEYOU !
? 虽然土,但也只会这么说
? You are my red red rose!(男生版)
? You are the soul in my heart!(女生版)
秘诀2:尽量使用高三学习的词汇
NO.3 具体词
? 房子 ? 好男人
? House ? Good man??
? Responsible ? Apartment公寓
? Flat精品公寓 ? Aggressive上进的
? Villa别墅 ? Steady稳重的
? Mansion四合院 ? Humorous幽默的
? 因为
? Because of
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? Thanks to 接好原因
? Owing to 接好原因
? Due to 坏原因
? 最想不到的词
? And→as well as→together with、along with
? By当通过的意思时:无条件用via替换
? Without无条件用with no替换
NO.4 替换词
? 班长
? Monitor监视器
? Class chief
? Class president
? The present of our class
? 好好学习,天天向上
? Good good study,day day up!
? The harder we weill study,themore progress we will make.
? 四大名著
? 西游记—A journal to the WEST
? 红楼梦—dream of Red mansion
? 三国演义—Romance of three kingdoms
? 水浒传—outlaws of Marsh land
? 孙子兵法Art of Wars
? 笑傲江湖The Hero of Heroes
作文中句子的取舍
不要以为自己学的很好,除非你GRE满分!
高考作文中,主要以简单句为主,复合句1-2句即可。
要记住:简单句并不简单!
试试吧!只用简单句翻译下面的句子
? 1、每年,都有很多大学生毕业。
? Everyyear,hundreds of thousands of college student graduated.
? 2、他们都想要工作.
? They long for finding jobs.
? 3、这些工作可以给他们高薪.
? The job can offer them considerable wealth.
? 4、这是不可能的。
? This seems impossible.
? 似乎挺简单??将他们组合起来,一句话!
? Everyyear,thousands of thousands of college student graduate, after that ,they are eager to find jobs owing
to hand some salaries , but this seems impossible!
秘诀3:尽量在多个简单句当中穿插适当的过渡词
? 姓名:杨嘉梁
? 性别: 男
? 年龄:17
? 出生地:中国
? 爱好:篮球
? 所在学校:四中
Born in Chinese,YJL,a 17-year-old boy, is keen on playing basketball,having graduated from NO.4 Middle school.
简单句简单吗?你能写出这样的简单句吗?
高考作文中常见的加分句式
NO.1 引入名言警句
? Just as saying goes,”….”.
? I insist that a life with no friend is a life with no sun.
? Honesty and diligence should be youreternal mates.Benjamin Franklin
? Science to the human mind is what air orwater to the body.
NO.2 引入 IT
(1)it引导的形式主语句式
? It is + adj.+ for sb.+ to do sth.
? Adj.的要求:看不见,摸不着 只存在于主观价值判断中的词。
? 例如:vital 、indispensable 、tough 、valuable 、 beneficial
(2)It引导的强调句:It is(was)+被强调部分+that/who+简单句的其他成分(不能强调谓语动词) ? 秘诀4:尽量在作文中避免人称代词做主语的句式过多.
? 如何避免?
你学了被动语态夹馍馍的啊??
NO.3 引入倒装句
(1)ONLY引导的倒装
? Only in this way…
(2)As引导的让步状语从句的倒装
? Adj/n/adv + as +主谓,+主句
NO.4 引入非限——作文具体化的法宝
NO.5 引入非谓
秘诀5:尽量在作文中使用二非
小词定乾坤——过渡词
必须必须必须必须必须必须学会的东西!
起
①目前,当前,现在:
? At present / presently/ currently
②首先,起初:
? At first / firstly /at the beginning of / Initially
③当谈到:
? Talking about , When asked about , When it comes to
承
①并列:
? at the same time , in the meantime , mean while , as well as
②递进:
? What’s more ,moreover , especially.
③补充(除此以外):
? besides , in addition
转
①弱转折:
? while , whereas
②强转折:
? in contrast , on the countary
③坏→好:
? Fortunatly , Amazingly ,Surprisingly
④好→坏:
? Unfortunatly , All of a sudden
合
①结果,所以,因此:
? thus , hence , therefore ,as a consequence
②总之,综上所述:
? All in all , Above all , Taking everything into consideration
③依我而言:
? On a personal level, As far as I concerned , According to my viewpoint.
吃透大纲
一、评分原则:
? 1、评分时应根据文章的内容和语言初步确定所属档次,然后以该档次的具体评分标准衡量,确定
或调整档次,最后给分。
? 2、评分时,应注意的主要内容:内容要点,应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性,上下文连贯性
以及语言的得体性。
? 3、词数少于80和多余120的,从总分中减去2分。
? 4、拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面,评分时,应使其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英美
拼写以及词汇用法均可接受。
? 5、如书写较差,以及影响交际,将分数降低一个档次!
(二)具体评分标准
? 1、覆盖所有内容要点
? 2、应用较多的语法结构和词汇
? 3、语法结构或词汇方面有少许错误,但为尽量使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致;具备较强的语
言应用能力
? 4、有效的使用了语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑
? 5、完全达到了预期的写作目的
必须注意的
? 如果作文要求是:假如你是…..
? 如果不以第一人称写作,直接扣7分。
怎么拿高分?背范文,套用
应用文套用句型
? 1、It’s my honor to write a letter to you.
? 2、I would be much obliged to you if you could read my letter.
? 3、I beg to be in possession of this oppprtunity to inform you a letter.
? 4、I am writing to you in the hope that…..
? 5、It give me great pleasure to receive your kind letter(of+date)
? 1.I must make a sincere and humble thaks to you.
? 2.I’m looking forward to you early reply.
? 3.I do regret the trouble I’m causing you.
? 4.I do regret that I can’t give you a more favourite reply
? 5.Please accept my most cordial thanksfor your timely help,which I will never forget.
完形填空
? 根据近10年来高考题,答案只有两种可能:5555 5564
? 答案没有连续的,连续两个错误率50%,连续三个错误率95%
高考作文误区
? 高考语文有满分作文,也有零分作文
? 高考英语没有满分作文,也没有零分作文
? 你们觉得考研的作文平均分为多少?满分3012.XX
新东方强力推荐十大必背范文
新东方强力推荐十大必背范文,抓紧啦,时间不多哦
1、致辞:
Directions: Write a speech on the opening of a conference of no less than 120 words. In your speech, you should:1、进行自我介绍,2、详细介绍大会内容,
3、结束语。
Good morning, ladies and gentlemen, welcome to Beijing! To begin with, I would like to make a brief introduction to myself. I am the president of Motorola (China) Electronics Ltd.
The following is my introduction to the conference. First, it is my great honor to be here with all of you and declare open the Conference of International Trade Cooperation. Second, on behalf of our company, I would like to express my heartfelt welcome to all the guests and delegates. Last, I believe our cooperative efforts are sure to be productive.
I wish all of you enjoy yourselves during this conference and hope the above information will help you. If you have any question for me, please feel free to ask at any time. Thank you for your attention.
2、求职信/求学信:
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter applying for a position of a company. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:1、申请职位,2、简要介绍自己的情况,3、期待回信。
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am senior from the Department of Business Administration of Beijing
University. I am writing the letter in purpose of applying for admission into your esteemed institution/your recently advertised position for a staff member.
I am sure that I am qualified for it. First, enclosed with this letter is my resume, which further details my previous academic qualifications and work experience.
Second, not only do my qualifications and experience make me a perfect candidate for it, my cheerful personality is well suited to studying in your prestigious university/working as a staff member. Last, my hobbies include sports and music.
Words fail me when I try to express my heartfelt gratitude to the help you rendered me. Your prompt and favorable attention to my inquiry would be highly appreciated.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
3、邀请信:
Directions: You want to invite some friends to a party. Write an invitation letter to them individually:1、邀请参加晚会,2、说明举办晚会的原因,3、将安排哪些活动。
Dear Wangcai,
I am greatly honored to formally invite you to participate in Mr. Old Fish’s wedding ceremony with Ms. Fujiwora to be held at Beijing Grand Hotel from 8 to 10 p.m. on April 1, 2007.
As you are a close friend of us, we would very much like you to attend the celebration and share our joy. The occasion will start at seven o’clock in the evening, with the showing of their wedding ceremony. This will be followed by a dinner party. At around ten, we will hold a small musical soiree, at which a band will perform some works by Bach and Strauss.
If you do not have any prior appointment on April 1, we look forward to the pleasure of your company.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
4、个人简历:
Directions: Write of resume of yourself of no less than 120 words. In it, you should:1、说明姓名、地址、联系方式、求职目标,2、教育背景、工作经历、资历,3、所获奖励、特长,以及个人资料。
RESUME
Li Ming
P. O. Box 237, Beijing University
5, Yiheyuan Road, Haidian District, Beijing 100871
Tel: 62768888 Email: liming@163.com
Career Objective: A position with management potential in the
banking business specializing in international corporate financing
Educational Background:
Sept 2003 toBeijing University
July 2007Major in International Business Management
Main courses include English,
computer,Business Management, Accounting, International Commercial Law Work Experience:
July 2006 toBank of China
June 2007Internship, Secretary to Deputy Manager of MarketingDraft business correspondence
Schedule deputy manager’s appointments
Qualifications:University graduation certificate and
bachelordegree to be conferred upon graduation (2007)College English Test Band 4June 2005
Honors & Awards:Twice awarded scholarship by Beijing
University2005& 2006
Special Skills:Familiarity with Microsoft Word, Excel
Ability to work independently
Outstanding Organizational skills
Experience:President of Student Union2003-present
Personal Data:Date of Birth: Sep. 17, 1984
Gender: Female
Marital Status: Unmarried
5、告示:
Directions: The Students’ Union of your department is planning a Chinese Speaking Contest. Write an announcement which covers the following
information:1、比赛目的、时间、地点,2、参赛者的要求,3、裁判和奖励的细节。
You should write about 120 words. Do not sign your own name at the end of
the letter. Use Department of Chinese Language and Literature at the end of the announcement.
Chinese Speaking Contest
December 22, 2007
To improve students’ ability to speak Chinese and enrich after-class activities, the Students’ Union of Department of Chinese Language and Literature is
organizing a school-wide Chinese speaking contest to be held on Saturday next week (29 December) at the Students’ Auditorium. Those who are interested in taking part in it may sign up with the monitor of their classes before Tuesday next week. Five professors will be invited to be judges. The first six winners will be given awards. Everybody is welcome to be present at the contest.
The Students’ Union
Department of Chinese Language and Literature
6、就业:
Directions: For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Jobs for Graduates. You should write at least 120 words and base your composition on the outline below:1、大学生难找工作,2、原因很多,3、解决的办法。
Job hunting has always been a headache for college students. Though many graduates are employed right after graduation, some are not. Most serious of all, some still have no idea where to go working even a long time after graduation.
The reasons for this phenomenon are various. On the one hand, a few years ago colleges and universities enrolled so many students in popular majors, such as economy, finance and so on that the number of graduates was greater than the need in the market. On the other hand, most graduates would rather stay in large cities without suitable job to do than go to the country.
I reckon this problem can be solved if both colleges and students take
measures. First, they should research the market and develop special skills to suit its need. Second, students’ attitude towards employment should be
changed. They should go to small cities and country. There they can also give full play to their professional knowledge. In a word, if we pay much attention, the situation can be improved.
7、考试:
Directions: For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic My Views on Examinations. You should write at least 120 words and base your composition on the outline below:1、大学都用考试来衡量学生的成绩,2、考生可能带来的副作用,3、我对考试的看法。
In most colleges and universities the examination is used as a chief means of deciding whether a student succeeds or fails in mastering a particular subject. Although it does the job quite efficiently, its side effects are also enormous.
To begin with, examinations lower the standards of teaching. Since teachers are often judged by examination results, they are reduced to training their students in exam techniques. No subjects can be taught successfully merely through being approached with intent to take examinations. In addition, the most undesirable effect is that examinations encourage bad study habits. As the examination score is the only criterion for his academic performance, a student is driven to memorize mechanically rather than to think creatively.
In fact, few of us admit that examinations can contribute anything really important to the students’ academic development. If that is the case, why cannot we make a change and devise something more efficient and reliable than examinations?
8、读后感:
Directions: For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic My Favorite Novel. You should write at least 120 words and base your composition on the outline below:1、我最喜爱的小说,2、该小说的内容,3、我为什么喜爱。
My favorite novel is Around the World in Eighty Days which is written by Jules Verne. The author was born in France and devoted himself to literature and wrote several scientific romances, which gained him the name——Father of Modern Science Fiction.
This is a book of science fiction which tells us an exciting story about an English gentleman, Mr. Phileas Fogg, who makes a bet with his clubmates and manages to travel around the world in eighty days. It gives us a vivid
description of the many difficulties and incidents which happen on his journey.
From this story, we can see the author’s deep love for the sea, travel and adventure, which played a vital role in his life. We are also astonished and convinced by his fertile imagination and scientific and geographical knowledge.
9、难忘的人:
Directions: For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic The most unforgettable Person I ever Know. You should write at least 120 words and base your composition on the outline below:1、我生活中最难忘的人是,2、为什么他(或她)令我难以忘怀,3、结论。
In my life I have met a great many people who are really worth recalling. But perhaps the most unforgettable person I ever know is my English teacher.
What frequently brings back memories of my school teacher is his special qualities. First and foremost, he gave us the greatest gift a teacher can offer—an awakening of a passion for learning. He not only led us to an
appreciation of the beauty and perfection of English language and literature, but also aroused our great interest in exploring something deeper in this field. Furthermore, I was attracted by his lively wit. I remember that we students always anticipated his class with great eagerness because his lecture were humorously delivered, never failing to provoke chuckles or loud laughs.
Although it is nearly two years since I attended his last class, he is the talk of our old classmates, and I know part of him has already stayed in my heart.
10、论说文框架:
Owing to the speedy economic development, the number of people who…has considerably increased/declined. It is universally acknowledged that … plays a crucial role in modern society.
Due attention has to be paid to the issue of…. With the reform and opening-
up in recent decades,people in mounting numbers have come to realize the significance of …. If we let this situation continue as it is, we do not know where humans will be in the forthcoming future.
Accordingly, it is imperative for us to take drastic measures. To begin with, we should appeal to the authorities to make strict laws to …. In addition, we should cultivate the awareness of people that … is essential to us. Only in this way can we reverse this disturbing trend illustrated above.
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1、阅读下面文字,按要求作文
《中国教育报》曾刊发过一条来自新华社的新闻,标题是“有责任感的毕业生求职最受欢迎”,内容是山东人才网对200家用人单位的人事主管调查发现,用人单位在挑选大学毕业生时,看重的因素依次是责任感、团队协作精神、待人接物能力等等,其中责任感被排在第一位。
读了上面的材料,你有怎样的感悟?请以“也谈责任”为话题,写一篇不少于800字的文章,立意自定,文体自选,题目自拟。
[写作提示] 这是一道话题作文题,话题作文审题立意要瞄准材料中的关键词“责任感”,从不同角度着眼,层层开掘,确定出不同的作文立意。例如,可以从“责任感”的重要性的角度,确定这样的立意:①责任是人生的最美内涵;②要勇于担负责任。也可以从“责任感”与他人的关系、与学业事业的关系上立意:①责任是人生之本;②责任是事业成功的基石等。
沉重的责任 造就人生的壮观
——也谈“责任”
王梦华
没有大山的脊梁,就没有大山的巍峨;没有责任的沉重,就没有人生的壮观。
——题记
窗外是冷冷的月光,窗内是淡淡的怅惘。
站在窗前,捧一杯清茶,希望它能冲淡自己的怅惘,任思绪在广远的时空张开翅膀。 苍天问我,我问苍天:什么是责任?
妈妈告诉我,责任也许是这样的:院中大榕树的鸟巢里有新衔来的春泥,有最绵软的飞絮、羽毛,有嗷嗷待哺的娇嫩雏鸟,有关爱与呵护的极致,甚至会有鸟妈妈驱逐强敌的振羽搏击,翅血淋漓。
这是妈妈眼里的责任:责任是全身心的付出,责任是沉甸甸的使命,造就人生的壮观。 历史告诉我,责任也许是这样的:“大梦谁先觉,平生我自知”,这是躬耕南阳的孔明在考试吧:www.kao8.cc一个神奇的考试网站。
吟哦。当时空落定生命的尘埃,斜阳亲吻着苍苔的时候,萧萧的马嘶打破了村野的宁静,诸葛孔明怀揣着满腹经纶,跟随刘皇叔上路了。孔明的心中装着一份知遇之恩,更装着一份责任,一份匡复汉室、拯救天下苍生的责任。因而,他一去数十年,呕心沥血,鞠躬尽瘁,直至殒命于茫茫五丈原。
这就是历史眼中的责任:责任是报效国家、济世怀人的赤诚肝胆,责任是沉甸甸的使命,造就人生的壮观。
什么是责任?什么是责任最深刻的内涵?我问上苍,苍天回答:“四十三年,望中犹记,烽火扬州路。可堪回首,佛狸祠下,一片神鸦社鼓!凭谁问:廉颇老矣,尚能饭否?”辛弃疾甘赴疆场,扫平敌寇,恢复中原,那就是一种责任;当地震来临时,唐山十三位农民兄弟救援队千里迢迢,跋山涉水,开赴四川灾区,全然置个人生死于不顾,那种淳朴的大爱真情,就是一种责任;而莘莘学子“三更灯火五更鸡”,为中华之崛起,为中华科技之崛起,而不辞劳苦,学海行舟的执著拼搏,就是一种责任。
收回思维翱翔的翅膀,眺望窗外,月光如水,广场朗朗;回首窗内,怅惘之人,心扉洞开:铁肩担道义,大材铸华章。
责任——沉甸甸的责任,造就人生的壮观!
[名师点评] 本文主旨鲜明,立意清晰,内容丰富,而且颇有激情和文采。议论阐述能化平淡为神奇,化抽象为形象,以形象感染人,以诗情激励人,令人备受鼓舞。特别是文章结尾“铁肩担道义,大材铸华章”的语句,诗意浓郁,颇为深刻、精警,令人击节叫绝。
2、阅读下面的文字,根据要求写一篇不少于800字的作文
人们总想到远方去旅行,远方似乎有身边找不到的东西,不仅仅是自然风光、人文胜地……更多的是一种梦想,一种精神归宿,一种灵魂里涌动的向往。生活中近的是现实,远的才是诗。所以远方总像一簇圣火,在人们心中燃烧。于是,我们总是期盼远方,充满放飞心灵的渴望。
要求:选择一个角度构思作文,自主确定立意,确定文体(诗歌除外),拟定标题;不要脱离材料内容或超出材料含义范围作文,不要套作,不得抄袭。
[写作提示] 这是一道新材料作文试题,给出的材料是富有文采、富含哲理的一段话。认真阅读这段材料,整体把握其思想态度,特别要抓住“远方、梦想、归宿、放飞心灵”等关键词语,仔细揣摩其内涵,并加以归纳整合。作文立意可以是为理想而奋斗,永不言弃;可以是摒弃一切世俗杂念,淡泊名利,让心灵永远恬淡宁静;可以是为了实现自己的人生目标,敢于冲破一切传统观念,放飞心灵,开拓创新,铸就人生新辉煌……
放飞心灵
周 涛
“我终于翱翔,用心凝望不害怕,哪里会有风就飞多远吧……”曾经被歌中所传达的信念深深感动,浮躁的心被它安抚平静,受伤的心灵与那双翅膀一起飞向天空。当一颗心刻下的只是失望的伤痕,当一朵朵怒放的鲜花渐渐萎缩,当一个个美好的瞬间转眼苍老了轮廓,当身心在忙碌的生活中感到疲惫……这时我们不妨给自己找一片自由的天空,一个宁静的港湾,让我们的心灵自由翱翔、自由呼吸。这时,你会发现沉闷的生活其实到处洋溢着生机,灰暗的人生其实暗含着美丽。
放飞心灵,是陶渊明那“采菊东篱下,悠然见南山”的恬静;是李白那“五岳寻仙不辞远,一生好入名山游”的洒脱;是陆游那“楼船夜雪瓜洲渡,铁马秋风大散关”的大气;更是岳飞那“壮志饥餐胡虏肉,笑谈渴饮匈奴血”的豪迈。也许你没有陶渊明的淡泊,也没有李白的洒脱,但你可以拥有名利之外的另一个世界,让心翱翔在自由的天空,驰骋于梦想的草原,你将拥有一片心灵的净土。
放飞心灵,你可以沿着曲曲弯弯的山路,一路收藏露珠的点点滴滴;你可以散步在柔软的沙滩上,一路捡起海贝的零零星星;你亦可以在万籁俱寂的夜空下看那流星划过,许愿的瞬间便是永恒……太多太多的事可以做,太多太多的路可以走,太多太多的方式可以选择。
放飞心灵,不需要大把大把的钞票,不需要一年半载的时间,也不需要冥思苦想。你只需独倚窗边,尽情聆听雨点敲窗的美妙的韵律,品味人生意义的永恒。这时的你没有世俗的纷扰,不必为琐事所累,这一刻你的心灵早已展翅飞翔在那梦的天空!
黄沙吹落了岁月的沧桑,驼铃依旧响在游子的心头。但吹落的是泪的苦涩,是心的犹豫,而驼铃荡出的是涤净的心灵!
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沙洲的芦苇
叶晓菲
我爱芦苇,我爱沙洲之上初春的芦苇——苇芽尖尖,光泽莹莹,贮满了生命的淡泊和淳朴。春日伊始,乍暖还寒时候,沙洲的芦苇已悄悄地伸展开它的根须,汲取着泥土中些许的营养,生机萌动,破冰拔节,茁壮生长。虽然它清醒地知道,这里没有温室,没有肥料,没有农人勤恳的呵护,没有梨园歌手柔情万种的歌咏和赞叹,但它们只要有湛湛的蓝天,朵朵的白云,便觉知足,便觉愉悦而惬意。有了这些,它们就可以在第一缕阳光溜进眼眸的时候,开始平凡而诗意的生活,演绎朴素而淡泊的生命乐章。
我爱芦苇,我爱沙洲之上秋日的芦苇——“蒹葭苍苍,白露为霜”,披霜的芦苇最可诠释不屈的坚韧和刚强。秋风瑟瑟,百花凋零,而芦花却开得圣洁而潇洒;严霜袭来,百草枯萎,
而沙洲的芦苇却仍然凛然挺立,不屈不挠。君可知,在历史的时空中,沙洲的芦苇曾被三国争雄的烽火烧得满目疮痍,但是“野火烧不尽,春风吹又生”,来年“红杏枝头春意闹”的时候,沙洲的芦苇又是葱葱绿绿,风采无限;君可知,在汗青的记忆里,“风萧萧兮易水寒,壮士一去兮不复还”,荆轲为燕国铲除暴秦踏上了千古不归路,而沙洲上的芦苇则伴着萧瑟秋风,伴着高渐离的击筑声,沙沙作响,为荆轲壮行;君可知,在抗战的史册中,日寇的铁蹄曾肆意地践踏北国白洋淀沙洲的芦苇,然而一片芦苇倒下了,千千万万丛芦苇顽强地聚在一起,霹雳一闪,无边的火海把日寇的残暴和淫威烧成了灰烬。
我爱芦苇,我爱春夏之际沙洲上的芦苇——苇叶飘举,苇秆婷婷。此时此刻,沙洲的芦苇最能给人“和睦和谐,与人为善”的微妙启迪。你看,河流涨了,湖泊满了,一片片沙洲次第隐没,芦苇便怡然自得地融进河湖港汊的大家庭。红鱼在芦苇中穿梭,青蛙在芦苇的脚跟鸣唱,调皮的蜻蜓一只只、一群群在苇叶之间、芦花之上盘旋嬉戏,而芦苇则像极了敦厚的兄长,它不恼不怒,一株株、一丛丛,你挨着我,我挨着你,为大家庭搭建起凉棚,任风雨敲击摧残亦无怨无悔。
举目芸芸众生,放眼山山水水,我要说,我爱芦苇,我爱在水一方的沙洲的芦苇。 这一片芦苇,青翠欲滴,郁郁葱葱,深深地扎根于沙洲之上,年年岁岁,岁岁年年,摇曳着尘世的沧桑,滴溅着生命的启迪,教我心境淡泊,教我朴质刚强,教我与人为善,教我每天笑迎那一轮温馨的朝阳……
我爱在水一方的沙洲的芦苇!
[名师点评] 本文作者审题准确,描写极富文采,字里行间激情洋溢。作者借沙洲芦苇,体悟出“淡泊淳朴”“坚韧刚强”“和谐处世”的人生哲理,层次清晰,逻辑严密。“红鱼在芦苇中穿梭,青蛙在芦苇的脚跟鸣唱,调皮的蜻蜓一只只、一群群在苇叶之间、芦花之上盘旋嬉戏,而芦苇则像极了敦厚的兄长,它不恼不怒,一株株、一丛丛,你挨着我,我挨着你,为大家庭搭建起凉棚,任风雨敲击摧残亦无怨无悔”这段行文,颇有诗情画意,艺术而形象地体现了主旨情感,令人频频击节称叹。
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